Monday, December 17, 2007

York Letter

20 Glenview Avenue
Toronto, On
M6A 1V4

Marilyn Andrews
The York School
1320 Yonge StreetToronto, Ontario
M4T 1X2

Hello, my name is Eric MacDonald and I’m very interested in applying to your school. I first came to SHS in grade 1 and I have stayed there to Grade 9. I’ve went for several tours of your school and I’ve spent a day there. I was very impressed and I got a great vibe from this school. This school is my first choice and I’m very happy to be applying there. The York School is my school of choice because I love to be challenged (and the IB program is challenging) and because it advanced and strong in every aspect of the school.

I believe that at SHS I help to keep it a small, successful working environment. I love to lead and challenge myself. I believe I bring a inviting feeling to the school because I’m friends with everyone. I like to always update my school for technology and try to create/improve things around the school. This year I’m the IT (media) captain and this basically means I work to keep our technology up-to-date and I also help with anything tech-related. This year I also played a big part in the making of an elective. I found out about an animation program, learned how to use it, then I presented it to the tech group. It became an elective and I constantly aid the kids in it and sometimes teach.

I was very impressed with your academics and you guys have a great facility. I love technology and you guys were very up-to-date in that category. I like to work in a small environment and your school had a very friendly vibe. Your school was also co-ed and that keeps you interested in school. I think I would fit in and be a positive influence in the class.

This is why I think I would be a great addition to your school and I would love to come. Your school was really appealing and I was very impressed.


Yours truly, Eric MacDonald

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Good for people to know.