The point was played
Intensely in the shade
The point was won
The match was done
this is very strong...... good ryming the words arent the strongest vocab but it rymes and its works amazingly well...the last to lines really pull the poem together... if u plan on changing anything dont change the last 2 lines
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this is very strong...... good ryming the words arent the strongest vocab but it rymes and its works amazingly well...
the last to lines really pull the poem together... if u plan on changing anything dont change the last 2 lines
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